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Recent Audio Reviews

144 Audio Reviews

~{=Review=}~

Interesting sounds, it's like you grabbed a sound chip from some computer from the 70s and/or 80s for this music, and yes, it's interesting 8)

Okay, I like these sounds, these sounds are like a computer, their composition is good, even though it only lasts 52/51 seconds, but anyway, I do admire the sounds and they are interesting, I have almost never heard these sounds, yes, when I listened to your music again, it was already reminding me of "La Cucaracha", I don't know why xD

For the rest, I don't find any fault or anything with your sounds and/or the composition, I just want to tell you to make your music longer, otherwise, well done! 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None.

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

Make it longer.

--Stars--
4,5/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
19,95/20 | A+

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

qlx-i responds:

Oh my god an alive human

So first of all, the reason composition is somewhat cohesive, is mostly because the piece is only 51 secs long. Also, if you look at my other compositions you may notice that some of them were thought to be massive orchestral-electro pieces, but were severely stripped down because of my poor skill and lack of tooling (so probably just skill issue). The other half (including this one) are written in acceptance that my skill is mostly shit and will probably remain that way for a long time :) . These were thrown together in a matter of, like, an hour or even less. And I also don't really know how to compose good chiptune either ( ._.)

I initially was looking forward to adopting OcularNebula style elements and, potentially some other great composers here (like meganeko, dimrain47, etc.), but I just... can't. I don't really know why. Maybe it's because of how hard it is to work with LMMS, maybe it's because I don't know some VSTS or design patterns people use. Maybe I just suck a sound design... I really wish there was some way to clearly write down the sound from your head.

I also found out that I can't really use chords that much (It creates a mess in trippleOscillator and I don't know any other good VSTs), but I really want to. There's also like, 2 decent bass presets in there and even these don't really go to the 'bass' bass level. The lack of clear harmony also impacts of melody, primarily in the more repetative parts, so it leads to kinda chaotic melody.

I really want to know if there are some resources which can help me.

Anyways, thank you for the review, it's been nice to finally hear something from someone. Wish you a great day or something idk

~{=Review=}~

Your piano rhythm and rhythms are fine.

Although, honestly, it is one of the worst music I have heard in the Classical genre, since there are parts that deserve to have more variety, really, a lot >.<

On the other hand, I recommend that the next time you go to make music, I recommend that you record it in a place where there is not so much sound, what do I know, from a fan, a hair dryer or wind.

Although the piano rhythms are good, I tell you to make more variety of it, since it is half basic and then it does a falling action and then I go up without sense >___<

Electronic music? Do you consider your music as electronic? I tell you that it is more Easy-Listening than electronic music.

For the rest, I recommend more variety and making the piano much better and, especially, bringing joy to your music and energy, good luck!

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

More variety to your music, improve the piano, more energy and joy

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

In my honest opinion, for this to be electronic music, look for instruments related to it.

--Stars--
1,5/20
~~REAL SCORE~~
05,07/20 | F+ / E-

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

~{=Reseña/"Review"=}~

Perfecto, simple, pero que tiene energía.

Me encantó este remezcla que le hiciste a la música del tejado de Plantas Vs. Zombis (PvZ en abreviatura :P), está excelente el sonido en estilo Rave Techno que contiene en cada parte de tu remezcla, por cierto, me dieron de jugar "Supervivencia: Infinito", apesar de que es en la piscina xD

Realmente tiene una energía, que apesar de que sea simple, es destacable y es lo que más me gusta de cada compositor y hasta lo podré tener yo también algún día (^-^)

En los problemas en los sonidos, no les veo ninguno, es una gran variedad de energía que me hizo llegar a escucharlo a alto volumen y sí es un toque muy especial, de verdad, ¡felicidades! 8)

~{=COSAS A/PARA MEJORAR=}~

Ninguno.

~{=IDEAS SUGERIDAS=}~

Ninguna.

~{=PREGUNTA PARA @CanineLotus=}~

¿Cuáles son tus cinco (5) plantas favoritas de Plantas Vs. Zombis?

Los míos son:
1. Gasoseta
2. Mazorcañón
3. Rabo de Gato
4. Planta Carroñívora
5. Melonpulta Congelada

--Estrellas--
5/5
~~PUNTUACIÓN REAL~~
20/20 | A++ (Guardado a «Faves»)

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

Recent Art Reviews

21 Art Reviews

~{=Reseña/"Review"=}~

Muy buen avatar, la verdad te quedó muy buen y en sus colores, diseño, etc.

Aunque es sólo una versión con color de una de tus imágenes que ya habías puesto en estas tierras (Newgrounds) llamado: «Inktober 28: Sparkle», pero en fin, me gusta más la versión que le hiciste a este con color 8)

En los problemas con los colores o algo, pues, no lo veo ninguno. Te quedó excelente los colores y el tono que tiene las gafas de tu personaje/Avatar, realmente está excelente tu imagen, ¡felicidades! :D

~{COSAS A/PARA MEJORAR=}~

Ninguno.

~{=IDEAS SUGERIDAS=}~

Ninguna.

--Estrellas--
5/5
~~PUNTUACIÓN REAL~~
20/20 | A++ (Guardado a «Faves»)

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

DamianBaezArt responds:

Gracias por tu feedback!

Aproveché algunos dibujos de mi inktober para practicar el color, y de paso actualizar el avatar :3

~{=Review=}~

The background is not bad at all, for me it looks good 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None.

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

Don't give up on funding issues, just keep going ;)

--Stars--
5/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
20/20 + Fave

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

¡Igualmente! :D

~{=COSAS A/PARA MEJORAR=}~

Ok, aprecio bastante tu imágen...

¡Buenos colores, buenos contrastes y buen todo!, la verdad es que no necesita ninguno, ¡felicidades y buen trabajo!
5/5 y guardado a "Faves"

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

DamianBaezArt responds:

Muchas gracias por tu feedback!
Felices fiestas <3

Hi everyone! I am Valentin Entertainment, this is my Newgrounds's account, and I'm a Geometry Dash's player :)

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