StormsTheory15's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Glass Jars Full of Beats 2]

~{=Review=}~

Music, really, music to my ears :D

Really, the energy you brought to your music and the experience I listened to, you really did excellent ~(^-^)~

I love that in the part at minute 1:10/1:09 where this piece of your music automatically ends so that then at minute 1:16/1:17 another of your music begins, It really is the transition of a most original track/music that I have heard in the entire Newgrounds Audio Portal >^<

Really, the composition, the energy and how you made your music, really here you have my five (5) stars for your music, it turned out very unique and original, my congratulations! 8D

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None.

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

None.

--Stars--
5/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
20/20 + fave

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

ThisIsLoxum responds:

TYSM BRO!!! I’m slowly improving lol

[Blue River (feat Aalasteir)]

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Excellent sound and composition, you did it well...

Let's see, for me it is not miscellaneous music that you put as a genre for your music, it seems to me like I don't know, like Jungle or New Wave, if you know, you can correct me 8)

Let's see, the sounds are well composed and their variety too, although this is not a loop, why did you put it in? o_O (*cough* *cough* whatever :P)

Returning to the sounds, the truth is that it doesn't need any changes and/or improvements, I just wish it were longer and that's it, I really appreciate it, Messrs. PA and Aalasteir, good job for your first collaboration between the two of you (2)! 8^)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None.

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

Make it longer

--Stars--
4,5/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
19,8/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

Aalasteir responds:

Thank you SSJ4-Valentin15, Yes, you are right. I'm not sure if it should be in the miscellaneous category; that was something I suggested. @PapoFuradoPA what do you think? It would make more sense to have labelled it as a song.

Thank you. Next time, hopefully, it will be a longer song.

[LIMBO!]

~{=Reseña/"Review"=}~

¡Muy bueno y relajante!

Realmente tiene un sólido sonido y ambientación que hace a tu música/pista un tono relajante y que la acompaña muy excelente con el piano ^.^ (por cierto, no escucho aveces música Jazz, no es porque no me guste, sino porque no me apetece demasiado; yo escucho música electrónica, pero eso no interesa ahora mismo xd)

Este sólido sonido hace que tu música sea relajante y tenga una buena composición, aunque no es la mejor composición que escuchado en mi vida, pero está bien 8)

Pero veamos, los sonidos y/o la composición te quedaron/quedó muy bien y eso te hizo que yo te diera una buena calificación de parte mía, sólo te quiero decir que tu música estuvo muy fluida y un poquito acelerado con los sonidos que hiciste a tu música, realmente me gustaría que fuese menos fluido y no tan acelerado, mas que sea más alegre e.e

Por lo demás, en la variedad de los sonidos después que escuché como tres (3) veces tu música, la verdad es que te quedó muy bien la variedad de tu música que has hecho, de verdad, ¡buen trabajo! ;)

~{=COSAS A/PARA MEJORAR=}~

Me gustaría que tu música no fuese muy fluida, ni tampoco que sea tan acelerada de lo que ya está y sólo quiero también que fuese más alegre, pero un poco

~{=IDEAS SUGERIDAS=}~

Ninguna.

--Estrellas--
4/5
~~PUNTUACIÓN REAL~~
16/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

itstdx responds:

muchísimas gracias por esta reseña tan bien pensada, tomaré tus puntos en consideración! :)

[Glass Soul OST // Soothing Glass]

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Interesting and relaxing tone,

Although I repeat it again (oh my God, the same mistake! O.o), your music is not a loop, but I'll let you pass that mistake. Let's see, good tone and I at least liked it, but I would like it to have a little more volume, because you can hardly hear anything xD, and let's see the Easy-Listening that is composed to your music, although it is repetitive, very repetitive. I really would like your music to have a little more variety and I'll give you a little more punctuation for this review from me (of course, I don't usually listen to Easy-Listening music, because it doesn't attract much attention, although it doesn't interest my tastes right now xD).

For the rest, more variety and that it had more volume and other things that your music has, I appreciate it, well done!

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

More variety and make your music louder

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

You already know about the "loop" thing you did in your music. I don't want to repeat it again

--Stars--
3/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
15,74/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

Tyhond responds:

I can hear perfectly fine? x3 It's quite loud for me.

Uhmm, it's not that deep xP I guess Variety would be nice but I like the way I make my music :> Of course the fact that there wasn't any mention of Chord or Melody means I pretty off to a nice track.

Thank you, even if it's a bit demotivating ;^;

[-MetroMarket-]

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Very good music and the melodic sounds are very well done,

These were very well done, by the way, it is worth telling you that your music is not Jazz, it is more Classical, but I will let you pass that ;)

Let's see, the sounds are happy and they comment on the composition, the parts where the sound is lowered and then raised seem very good to me. In parts you did it well and it is something I like about every artist 8), Yes, Classical or Jazz music doesn't attract my attention as much, it's not that I don't like it, it's just that it doesn't satisfy, but I do listen to it sometimes, I love electronic music more e.e (although yes, it won't be to my liking right now, that doesn't matter xD)

For the rest, I liked your music in terms of composition; very creative and has a very good melody, congratulations! 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None.

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

None.

--Stars--
5/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
20/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

Creeperforce24 responds:

I actually thought you sent a comment to the collab and not my song lol 😂
Also I put it as jazz due the oboe you hear, and it sounds more authentic! Glad you like it!
Also if you like electro, you might like some of my other stuff.

[Shined]

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Your music is super pleasant, the sounds it has are beautiful >v<

Let's see, the parts where they are repeated are great, a beautiful composition makes your music stand out, the sounds are the best I have heard 8)

Oh by the way, I'm going to correct you on the genre of your music, Law.

Your music is not Techno, it is more like Eurodance or Rave Trance, but Techno is not very good, I can only tell you to put it better in Dance, because as far as I know, The Eurodance or Rave Trance music category does not exist in these Grounds :(

I liked the sounds, I don't really see any problem or anything in the tone, it's just a great energy, but I can only tell you to become more and more informed when it comes to making music, what genre your specific music should be in, etc.

For the rest, I can even correct your spelling, but nothing more, but the things that your music has does not mean that I lower the stars of this review, I just want to tell you that your music is excellent and beautiful, congratulations! ~(^-^)~

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None.

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

Even though it has nothing to do with this review I'm doing, I can tell you that you should inform yourself in what genre your future music will fall into

--Stars--
5/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
20/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

LawrenceindaSky responds:

Thank you so much for the feedback! Although I messed with music editing for years, I only recently started producing tracks on rare occasion due to the struggle of creating original melodys off of chord progressions with no music theory. I still consider myself new so knowing Genre helps a ton!

[A2]

~{=Review=}~

Okay, much better than your previous music ;)

Very good, the sounds and the composition have some horniness, but they hold it well.

Of course, your music compared to your previous music is not Dance, this is more Jungle or Ambient, really all the sounds do not need any change ;p

I really liked the sounds that are composed and the mixes themselves, but what I would like is for it to be longer, and oh by the way, A detail that will be very useful to you is that the next time you publish a short music (in this case twenty-nine (29) seconds) that is a loop, you have to send it to a ".wav" file because a ".mp3" sometimes does not detect loops, a ".wav" yes 8^)

Otherwise, your music doesn't need any changes to the composition, I just want to say that it would have been longer

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None.

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

Make your music longer, and by the way, for very short music (in this case twenty-nine (29) seconds) send it to the Audio Portal of these Grounds to ".wav"

--Stars--
4,5/5 / 18,71/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

ThisIsLoxum responds:

Yoooooo another one tysm again, I’ll try to make better songs and full ones

[A1]

~{=Review=}~

Pleasant sound and melody composed 8)

The thing I love most about every music artist is how they have made the sounds and how good they are. It's what I like the most, and to see the sounds I liked it and it has a good piano tone, really, pleasant!

Of course, your music is not Dance at all, it's more Breakbeat, I love the drop, but the beginning could be better by putting a little more volume, oh by the way, your music would have been longer :(

Of course, your music is not a loop and does not coordinate at all, so why did you put it in? o.O, well it can happen, right? xD

Returning to the sounds, otherwise I don't see any more, I just would like your music to be longer to be only thirty-five (35) seconds, otherwise, it's fine ^-^

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

At first put more volume

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

Make it longer, and by the way, if you are trying a loop you can say make some rhythm or composition that coordinates with the beginning :)

--Stars--
4/5 / 15,24/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

ThisIsLoxum responds:

Tysm for the reply, I didn’t try very hard on these songs but I guess they are good :)

[The Elder's Fruity Tear]

~{=Review=}~

Excellent and relaxing,

The tones are very well done, very nice and relaxing in being an orchestra (even so, your music is not an orchestra, it is more easy-listening). The piano melody makes me give it more than three (3) stars.

But the only problem why I give it four (4) stars is that even though you made a very good piano rhythm, you could really make it softer and not completely fluid, Even so, apart from the piano, the composition is very good and relaxing, but it could have a little more variety and that's it (but don't go overboard)

Another thing is that your music is not a loop, a loop cannot have a fading action that makes your music end little by little and not completely coordinate with the end, I would tell you to do more composition and more rhythm and in the end blur it and make a little fall and that's it, otherwise it turned out well

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

More variety, make the piano smoother and not fluid

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

For your loop, I would tell you to do more composition, more rhythm and at the end do a fade and a little falling action and that's it

--Stars--
4/5 / 15,81/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

Tyhond responds:

Things to Improve (At the moment for me): Use a better Software xP

[PVZ Remake OST - Crazy Dave]

~{=Reseña/"Review"=}~

Excelentes mezclas y tonos compuestos de esa gran música de PvZ (Plantas Vs. Zombis), tiene muy excelente uso del "Techno" y "Melodic Trance", aunque, tu música tiene prácticamente la misma composición que la original >.<

Veamos, tu música tiene algunos problemas por eso le doy 4 estrellas a tu música, y es que a pesar de que tu música tiene algo de ritmo y composición versionada, realmente es escuchar la original prácticamente te diría que hagas tonos más originales, ah por cierto, si la música termina en el minuto 1:27, entonces tendrás que buscar un editor de audio (o algo así como e_e) para recortar tu música a esa duración que tiene,

Por lo demás me gustaría que le hicieras más mezclas y variedad a tu música para que tengas más posibilidades de que aumente ese "rating", ¡de nada! ;)

~{=COSAS A/PARA MEJORAR=}~

Más variedad, más composición y que no sea prácticamente lo mismo

~{=IDEAS SUGERIDAS=}~

La próxima vez que vayas a publicar una música donde una pequeña parte esté vacía y una gran parte tenga audio, busca un editor de audio o algo para recortar

--Estrellas--
4/5 / 15,03/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

CanineLotus responds:

Hola, gracias por tomarte el tiempo de escribir la reseña
quiero empezar con que la musica tiene ya un par de años pero aparte
Este proyecto de rehacer la banda sonora de PVZ Empezo por que cuando escuche la banda sonora original no tenia la mejor calidad, entonces queria simplemente mejorar la calidad recomponiendo la cancion original
despues eso muto a las mismas canciones con algunos cambios, en este caso como fue una de las primeras que hice no tiene practicamente ningun cambio
y sobre lo de la parte vacia, la proxima la voy a recortar
Gracias por la review!