StormsTheory15's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Puzzle Solving (W.I.P)]

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Very good music even if it is not finished (WIP/Work In Progress) It's really very nice when it comes to mixing electric guitars and the soundtrack ;)

Although yes, a very good loop with the themes of making a Jungle/Ambient-Rock, but for music of only thirteen (13) seconds, I would recommend that you publish your music in ".wav" format. Since if you published it in ".mp3" format the loop is sometimes not detected, however the ".wav" is 8)

But here in this review I am not talking about technology (but you're welcome anyway for that small piece xD), but let's see in the sound issues, I would tell you to make it longer, and also more electric guitar speakers with soundtrack mixes, and that's it!

For the rest, let it be longer and at least with more mixes and soundtrack, and with more electric guitar speakers, you're welcome and good luck with the final version! :D

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

More electric guitar speakers, more soundtrack and mixes

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

Make it longer, and also, the next time when you are going to publish a short audio, do it in ".wav" format

--Stars--
4/5 / 17/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

vaguememory responds:

Thanks for the review!! o_O
I wasn't really sure how the format loop works, but I'll keep that in mind.

[Dance Of Every]

~{=Review=}~

Your sounds and everything are beautiful,

Although more than Dance it is more Ambient-Techno, Drum N/& Bass or Synthwave, and let's see, I liked the sounds. Your sounds are very nice (although they are not the best >_>), the parts where they are repeated or that are monotonous are fine, they coordinate with some of the melody 8)

I just want to tell you that the only objection I have to your music is that it is a little empty in the notes where they are repeated, I give it more variety and that's it!

Otherwise, the sounds of your music turned out nice, and for everything else, it doesn't need any improvement, congratulations! :D

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None, just more variety to your music

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

None.

--Stars--
4,5/5 / 19,87/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

X-ManOfficial responds:

Of course, I appreciate your opinion, but I personally think that my very first tracks do not need comments, since I myself recognize them as terrible. I didn't know how to do anything in 2021, I didn't know the notes, no progression, nothing. Consider this.

[The Blossom Blue Ideology]

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O.O
The tones that your music has are beautiful, although it is not the best in the world, but it is ok (it is acceptable)

Your mixes of sounds and rhythms are excellent, and the tones that are repeated too, They aren't the best tones I've heard, but that doesn't stop me from downgrading them. By the way, one of the qualms I have about your music is that it is not a loop. A loop should have some kind of soundtrack or rhythm that coordinates with the beginning, it should not have some kind of drop action before the cut (so if you don't know how to loop, change that to "Song")

Although I liked the sounds that your music has, the truth is that I would like you to make more variety and not have it be a bit monotonous (and also for your music to be longer >.<)

For the rest, I liked a lot of the music, and for the rest, more mixes and rhythms, and more variety with the sounds that your music already has integrated, you're welcome! Mr. Tyhond! 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

More variety with the sounds that are already integrated into your music, do not make it monotonous and make more mixes and rhythms

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

Make some kind of rhythm or soundtrack that can coordinate with the beginning and make your music longer

--Stars--
3,5/5 / 16,39/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

Tyhond responds:

Oh thank you! :) Yeah, I'm trying to learn LMMS Software at the moment.

[Motivation]

~{=Reseña/"Review"=}~

Los sonidos parecen como si fuera una música de Mario Bros. ^.^

Los tonos que hiciste a tu música parecen como si estás intentando imitar la música de cuando vas a agarrar una estrella de inmortalidad en la mayoría de los juegos de Mario (sólo que anda un poco acelerado de lo normal xD)

Aunque te felicito por la buena banda sonora que hiciste, y eso lo agradezco y que tengan una similitud en sus mezclas y variedad, también lo convierte en una buena banda sonora 8)

Las partes repetidas son muy buenos y con tonos que parecen de "Jungle-ambient" lo hacen divertido, ¡felicidades!

~{=COSAS A/PARA MEJORAR=}~

Ninguno.

~{=IDEAS SUGERIDAS=}~

Ninguna.

--Estrellas--
5/5 / 20/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

EmsDeLaRoZ responds:

Gracias amable señor, tenga un buen día

[Fool Monki]

Very good and interesting tones that your music has! ^-^

Really, interesting sounds to hear there, it has some great monotones (although, they are not perfect) those tones are really very nice, and it matches it with more original and beautiful tones,

But the only problem is that your music is more New Wave than Classical, and by the way, the monotones are a bit the same, and it doesn't fit at all well, I just want to say that you do more mixes with those monotones and with more rhythms, thus making your music not so inconsistent in its soundtrack >_>

Otherwise, your music is very beautiful, and very good tones that I have heard in my life, really, good job! :D

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None, just improve the monotones so that they are more consistent with the music and that's it

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

None.
Stars: 4,5/5 / 18/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (ValentinEntertainment)

GlobuX responds:

thanks a bunch, but for real i did this tune for joke. idk what is real genre of this tune

[KAVKAZ PHONK]

O.O
Excellent tone and very good! +_+

First time I hear Russian music in the Newlands xD

Although yes, good mixes and rhythms that are fused with the vocals, and make it have a good sound, and really, very successful! (But yes, I don't like Phonk music or variants of Hip Hop music, but that's not interesting right now :p)

I just want to say, make more vowels and have at least more mixtures of sounds to the vowels, but don't change the vowels, just leave it like that and that's it, but without counting the vowels, I don't want you to change the rhythms, just a little more variety with the ones that are already integrated into the music 8)

Otherwise, they are fine, but there could be a little more improvement and it looks better

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

More mixes and more vocals, and give more variety with the rhythms that are already integrated into your music (I mean use them)

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

None.
Stars: 4/5 / 16/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (ValentinEntertainment)

TheZobochin responds:

thanks for your feedback! this is one of my relatively old tracks that has gained a huge number of plays on platforms (this track is the most popular, it has 2 million plays :0)
if you want, you can listen to my other works in my profile :)

[Determination]

I love your music! :D

The truth is, it is very much in what it is in the drop transition, although it is not entirely Dubstep, but rather a fusion of Drumstep with EDM and/or Techno,

But yes, although the drop coincides with the pre-drop, it has some details that the rhythms have when passing to the drop (as if from a triangle that one of its pieces fell >.>) I just want to say that you mix some more rhythm and sound to match the drop (as if you are going to try to fix the triangle :P)

Even so, I loved the swing of the drop in your music, it doesn't need any details, I would like your music to be longer, since those sounds DO have potential :D

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

Give a little more rhythms and mixes to the transition from the drop to the pre-drop, and otherwise, don't change anything

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

Make it longer
Stars: 4,5/5 / 19/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (ValentinEntertainment)

Axsou responds:

Wow thanks for this review, I could always update it to make it longer, I was thinking about adding my own vocals and as for the riser I tried to do a progressive pitch change on one element but I did it by changing the “character” setting I think so maybe I could try to do it some other way. I am used to only being able to modulate volume in GarageBand so this is definitely a new world of possibilities for me 🙂

[stvr]

>______<
Ewwwwwww...

I liked the transitions that your music, and the soundtrack that is composed, but what I don't like is that it is practically the same copy and paste and it doesn't do anything good, quite the opposite, I would recommend that it at least have more mixes and a soundtrack, and that you remove that same monotony that is already very overused, oh by the way...

Your music is not a loop at all :/

A loop should not have a drop ending, because it already becomes music than what you are thinking, a loop is more about having some soundtrack and/or rhythm that can fit with the beginning 8/

For the rest of the details that your music has, I want to tell you that part of it is good and part of it is (to be honest e_e) bad, but still, for the rest, you have to improve it! And there you will have more qualification from me

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

I really don't feel like summarizing, but you already have the details that I told you
1/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

Dug481 responds:

Yeah honestly this shouldn’t have been 3 mins

[The Wanderer]

O.O
Your audio turned out quite nice, it was great! :D

But the only problem why I give 4 and a half stars is because the label that says "epic-drop" doesn't fit it well and on top of that your music is more Trance than Techno e_e

I would tell you to improve the parts of the drop, because an epic drop would have to be more intense and more about mixing and soundtrack, but be careful, it does not mean that you have to change the soundtrack (or something like that o_O) Just improve the parts of the drop, and just don't change anything else, but the soundtrack and the monotones it has were very beautiful :)

But still, I really appreciate your music, I only recommend improving the drop and that's it, otherwise, I see no problem. Congratulations! 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None, just improve the drop
4,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

AlastReYn responds:

Thank you for your assessment

[Touhou - Bad Apple!!]

O.O
Really cool! Great, but...

Actually, your music, more than Heavy Metal, is more a mix of Electronic Rock, Electronic Pop and Techno genres (So ​​I recommend that you put your music on General Rock or Miscellaneous), and I would recommend that you capture a little more of the "Pop" (so to speak) that the original music has (but you do capture it like 60%, but that's fine ;P) Otherwise it's excellent, and you applied the original rhythm for the electric guitar, and really, it turned out fantastic! :D

Otherwise, it does not need any further improvement 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None, it's simply capturing a little more of the "Pop" that the original music has and that's it
4,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

Treviabot92-Virstein responds:

I'd personally more refer to it as a power metal cover if I could. Sadly, that (sub)genre isn't an option, so I instead use the heavy metal umbrella that it objectively belongs to.

The way I rendered the song was more meant to evoke nostalgia for an era of gaming not seen since the early 90s than it was to be a one-to-one recreation of how it appeared in various Touhou-related media. If I cover a song with the express purpose of making it as close to the original as possible, it's like it would be better if I hadn't covered it at all. At that point, there would be little merit in the piece for it to be called transformative use.

For you, I would recommend you give a listen to some power metal bands to see what exactly I'm trying to get at with my music. I doubt I'll ever hold a candle to the likes of Sabaton, DragonForce, Turisas, or Brothers of Metal, but hey, a guy can try. And I've definitely been trying for some fifteen-odd years, I'd like to think I've grown.

Thanks for the review!