StormsTheory15's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Omega]

o_O
The truth is, the sounds are great,

Your music is not so "Industrial", it is more like Techno in fusion with Chipstep, but Industrial is not so much, I tell you, put your music in Miscellaneous or fusion, or choose those 2 genres that I told you,

Let's see, the sounds are good, good soundtrack but it is very catchy, and there is almost no soundtrack e-e

Oh and I recommend that you improve the ending (Or is it a Loop? I have no idea :P), be careful, a good ending should have some type of falling action before the cut, I would tell you to do the ending with a drum instrument, and that's it 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

Improve the ending, make more soundtrack and put the correct genre

-Have a good end of the year and you're welcome!
4/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

LGmusic responds:

Thanks for the feedback, its not a loop I just struggle with composition a lot. I appreciate you looking in depth thats really cool :)

[METALLIC]

o_O
Excellent mixes, really, very good! But...

Your music is not Drum N/& Bass at all, it is more a great mix of genres of Hard Rock, Industrial Rock, Hard Trance, Techno, Electronic Rock, Punk, etc. (Seriously, there are too many genres in your music xD) So I recommend that you put your music in Industrial or Miscellaneous,

Now let's see... In terms of sound, I tell you that if you have a very good soundtrack that is mixed with those that are the Electric Guitar, that is what I liked the most about your music, but still, I tell you to make more soundtrack and more mixes with the electric guitar, and I recommend that you look for an audio editing program (or something), so that you can cut your music to minute 3:33 or 3:32, since the rest is empty :/

And also, do the monotones a little better and more rhythms with the electric guitar...

Otherwise, I loved it, I appreciate it very much 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

Trim the audio at 3:33 or 3:32, make more rhythms with the electric guitar and more soundtrack, improve the monotones, and put your music to Miscellaneous or Industrial
4/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

chris-marcell responds:

Wow! Thanks for the help

[Echtzentenjun]

O.O
Very good mix of Chiptune/8-bit with the theme in making it as if it were ambient with Techno,

Still, it uses Techno a lot with the Ambient and that's what I love the most, In fact, your music makes me think of a cave or labyrinth theme in an RPG or Platform video game, I don't know why xD

Regarding sounds, well, I would tell you to add more Chiptune/8-bit in some parts, and the soundtrack and mixes it has, don't change them, really, I liked it! ^-^

Otherwise, I appreciate it!

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None, just give some more Chiptune/8-bit mixes to your music and you're done
4,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

NoxwPrimagen responds:

i am so glad you like it. i am more than willing to experiment with chiptune. there is a lot of unexplored territory at least that is how i view it on my end.
funny thing is. this was done in a real DAW. not even a tracker.

[Serenity]

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Great Drum N Bass, although like this, you go overboard in genres because it is mixed with Hard Techno/Hardcore,

Even so, your music is a mix of Breakcore and Drum N/& Bass, but also Hard Techno (Hardcore), I recommend that you put it in Miscellaneous,

The monotones and the melody are fantastic, I could tell you to add a little more (but don't go overboard XD), and in some sections they are very fluid with the drums ("Dun" "Dun"), but they are good but I would like it to have more variety,

Otherwise, they are fantastic and I liked it! 8D

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

Almost nothing, just make more monotone and melody, and add more drums
4,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

PizdecVC responds:

Thank you!

[Shatter]

For to be your first music it's not bad at all, but...

The truth is that I really appreciate your attempt, but I want to tell you that your music is not Dance, it is more like a fusion between Breakcore and Trance :P

Also, I want to tell you to make more soundtrack and more sounds of a higher quality, and put a little more BPM on it,

And for the rest, I really appreciate your attempt and you have a good soundtrack mix and it has a good potential to be your first music 8)

-You're welcome! ~(^-^)~
3,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

graveside responds:

Thanks! Yeah I’m not too familiar with genres, so I just put dance as a general one.

[Jungle Funkin']

Ehhhhhh...

The sounds are not very interesting, but they are more or less okay, I recommend:

№1- More rhythms and soundtrack with the piano

№2- Make it longer and more exciting the soundtrack with sounds

№3- Give it a better BPM @_@

For the rest, improve the piano a little more and it should be a little better :L
2/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

xanxoepico responds:

It is true that it's not very interesting, as I made it very quickly (in less than an hour lol) and could've done a lot better, however 2 of your recommendations do not apply fully to this specific song, because the collab asked for the songs to be at 185BPM, and only 32 bars, so it'd be going against it's rules to make it longer

[ROUTE 95]

~(^-^~) ~(^-^)~ (~^-^)~

I love your music very much, and it has very good rhythms and really, they are very wonderful and fun 8)

Still, I recommend you put a little more soundtrack and add a little more "Pop" (So to speak) in parts where there is no electric guitar

It is very beautiful, in some of it it has and they are very good and quite energetic, even so, it maintains excellent, very good Electric Guitar touches and that is what I liked most about your music ⁠\⁠(⁠^_^\) (/^_^)/

For the rest, I really appreciate it, but it will have to be improved a little in some parts

-You're welcome! :D
4,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

wwhhooami responds:

thank you for your feedback and kind words!