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~{=Reseña=}~

Excelente banda sonora.

A ver, me encanta bastante los efectos de «bum bum» que hizo a lo largo de tu música y ¡son únicos de los que he visto! Sin embargo, estos géneros de «future bass» y «trap» son los géneros musicales que casi no los llego a escuchar y/o se me olvidan... e_e

Tu música es pegajosa en muchas partes que tienen ese «bum bum», aunque no es para mucho. Eso sí, el inicio me contempla una satisfacción y es muy balanceado hasta el minuto 0:38 o 0:37. ¡Eso me gusta! (~^ω^)~

No tengo una reseña muy clara con la letra de tu música porque ustedes no pusieron, en la descripción, la letra, ya sea porque les dan pereza o es porque obviamente la comunidad de las "NUEVAS" Tierras es pura gente anglosajona; por favor, les recomiendo que pongan la letra en la descripción para poder captar mejor. (e~e)

Yendo al detalle del porqué le doy cuatro estrellas, me gustaría que haya un poco más de efectos sonoros, mas que no sean el mismo «bum bum» y que la música termine hasta el minuto 3:07 o 3:08 porque, para mí, le queda mejor.

Por lo demás, ¡está bien hecho y con detalles que veo por primera vez! ¡Felicidades! B)

~{=COSA(S) A/PARA MEJORAR=}~

Más efectos sonoros.

~{=IDEA(S) SUGERIDA(S)=}~

Que la música termine en el minuto 3:07/3:08.

--Estrellas--
4/5
~~PUNTUACIÓN REAL~~
16,99/20 | B+ / A-

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

~{=Iritzia=}~

Zure musikak soinu eder eta dotoreak ditu

Egia esan, soinuak oso dotoreak dira eta pianoarekiko erritmo onargarriak ditu.

Hala eta guztiz ere, ez nago guztiz ziur izenburua zure musikari oso ondo egokitzen zaionik, hilerriko musika edo gau euritsuaren musika dirudielako. e-e

Ea, zure musika oso ona da notan, baina pixka bat itsaskorra da pianoagatik. Pianoarekin erritmo ez hain erakargarriak gehiago egitea esango nuke (baina ez gehiegi).

Bestela ondo dago eta pianoarekin luzeagoa eta barietate gehiagorekin egitea esango nuke. Ongi egin! 8)

~{=HOBETZEKO GAUZAK=}~

Pianoarekin barietate txiki batek, ordea, ez du soinua bera aldatzen.

~{=IRADOKITAKO IDEIAK=}~

Luzatu zure musika

--Izarrak--
4/5
~~ERREAL PUNTUAZIOA~~
18,04 | A- | B+

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

~{=Reseña/«Review»=}~

Muy buen tono de música campesina (o algo así cómo se llama el género)

La composición se lo lleva más que todo la guitarra y flauta; la guitarra le da un tono supereficiente y buen ritmo en los tambores y, además, tu música parece más que todo una música campesina o algo que ponen los adultos mayores en tierras agrícolas en mi país (cosa que me imagino que es lo mismo en tu país, ya que, según tú, eres de Argentina)

Está pegajoso los tonos que están atornillados los /clin/ /clin/, /clin/ /clin/ de la guitarra que hace que le dé una satisfacción para mí, aunque prefiero variedad en partes que estén pegajosas y, en especial, la parte del 1:05/1:06 que me gustaría que tuviera un poquito de esa sonora guitarra hasta el 1:10 o 1:09

A ver, para terminar, no estoy totalmente seguro de que tu música es un bucle o es una música normal porque los últimos segundos de tu música termina directamente sin ninguna caída antes del corte, ese detalle te lo recomiendo porsiacaso. En fin, me encantó tu música y ese detalle de tener una sensación de escuchar una música que parece campesina; un detalle que es superhipermegarespetable, ¡enhorabuena! 8)

~{=COSA(S) A/PARA MEJORAR=}~

Más variedad

~{=IDEA(S) SUGERIDA(S)=}~

Hacer una acción de caída antes del corte para hacer más cómodo tu música

--Estrellas--
4/5
~~PUNTUACIÓN REAL~~
17,89/20 | B+ / A-

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

fr0gpr0 responds:

Ey storms! muchas gracias por tu feedback! Generalmente estás canciones las pienso como un bucle, pero en este caso la verdad sería bueno mandarle el cierre al final. Voy a tener en cuenta tus apreciaciones, gracias por escuchar!!

~{=Review=}~

The sounds are like those of a video game...

Well, I love the composition and the variety of your music, although they are similar to those of a video game. Your music reminds me to the Opening & Title of Mega Man 2 (NES), honestly, your music could be like a main theme of a video game in my honest opinion 8)

Of course, I don't totally agree with Jazkon about the piano and the sounds of your music, I say that the piano is fine, don't add anything to the piano e_e

What I do tell you is to add some effects to your music, but not too much. However, don't add anything to the piano as I already mentioned

Otherwise, I would like you to improve the final part of your music so that it coordinates with the beginning part or if it is like what I told you, I would tell you to do a falling action before the cut so that it is like an opening and title of a video game 8)

In the other details they are well done, you're welcome! =)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

More effects and improve the final part of your music so that it coordinates with the beginning

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

If you're making music that's like an opening and title for a video game like Mega Man, I'd tell you to do a falling action before the cut to end it

--Stars--
4,5/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
19,79/20 | A+

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

FeniXNova04 responds:

I didn't expect a review this detailed! Thank you for the feedback :)

~{=Review=}~

Excellent instruments, details and very well mixed composition 8)

I love your composition of your music and it is very comfortable. This composition that is throughout and some falling actions are well done and detailed with joy ^_^

Of course, some parts of your music were catchy and with it, honestly, I would tell you to do the part from 1:20 or 1:21 to 1:51 or 1:52 with a little more variety, since it is somewhat catchy with that composition detail, and yes, your music is not New Wave

Your music is more of Trance, as there are some parts that lower in intensity in the composition you recorded

Otherwise it's fine, I just wish there was some variety in some parts that were catchy, but not overdo it in others. I wish you luck in getting into NGADM with the music you made! 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

More variety and effect

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

None.

--Stars--
4/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
18,77/20 | A-/B+

(This review is not affiliated for/with the NGADM)

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

icantpronouncethis responds:

Thank you so much for checking it out.
I really appreciate the criticism you dropped.
Definitely will keep in mind on future projects.
The genre stuff on NG is super confusing to be honest. I wanna ask the Lord of Newgrounds to find a simpler way to categorize genres.

~{=Review=}~

Great inspiration, details towards N.H.XXII

Without a doubt, you were inspired by too many songs towards that composer, the energy composed in your music has been noticed, although you did not give a more original title to your music... that does not matter :P

Those hard Techno rhythms with Trance keep a great balance to your music, these exquisite rhythms of the pianos and drums are totally comfortable in your music and that gives a great detail (~^^)~

Honestly, you've done a great job in getting inspired by that artist I already mentioned, and the piano parts are the ones I liked the most and are my favorites =D

In short, great detail, great inspiration and excellent your composition so Hardcore Techno or Rave Trance that you made to your music. Keep it up and congratulations! (^.^)/

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None.

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

None.

--Stars--
5/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
20/20 | A++

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

~{=Reseña/«Review»=}~

¡Estos tonos, composición, variedad y mezclas tienen una intensidad que se relaciona con la tranquilidad! 8)

A ver, me encanta los tonos y es un muy excelente detalle, el título está bien, me hizo pensar en una flor rosa; son agradables los sonidos y mantienen una buena maniobra, ¡sinceramente, es genial!, pero a ver, tu música no es Dance, si no más bien es Synthwave, Tecno o Breakcore

Y a ver, realmente, no veo algún problema con los sonidos en tu música, ya sea composición, ritmo, tono, etc. Realmente, te quedó muy linda tu música, es una buena pasta con carne molida y que le agregaste albóndigas, de verdad, ¡delicioso! <3

~{=COSAS A/PARA MEJORAR=}~

Ninguno.

~{=IDEAS SUGERIDAS=}~

Ninguna.

--Estrellas--
5/5
~~PUNTUACIÓN REAL~~
20/20 | A++

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

~{=Review=}~

Very good tone with the guitar and in the formation of the composition, detail, tone, etc.

He maintains a good maneuver with the guitar even if it is a little creaky, he has good coordination in the loop when it ends to be repeated again, I really like the guitar (/^-^)/

The composition gives a good detail to the guitar, more so with the rhythms and BPM (I don't know how many it will have, I imagine it's 120 or 135, if you know, tell me!)

Although I like the tones, the composition, etc., I feel that the guitar is a little creaky in some parts and needs some variety, the duration (1:20) is acceptable, for me don't make it longer (well, if you want :P). For the rest, I liked the tones it has and the maneuvering with the guitar, even though it is creaky; otherwise, I love it! 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

Some variety and that the guitar is not a little cracked, that is, a little improvement with the guitar

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

None.

~{=A QUESTION FOR @TheReq=}~

What do labels have to do with your music, that is, with "Dragon Ball Z"?

--Stars--
4/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
17,39/20 | A

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

TheReq responds:

This one was inspired by fighterz actually, thats why I attached it to dbz

~{=Short review=}~

Edexy, don't pay attention to the scoundrel Mr. Jued, he is just a teenager, child or pre-adult who only wants to insult people who play Geometry Dash 8)

@JuedSeferRevival, If you're watching my review, I want to tell you to go fuck yourself or stop having a mind up your ass! Seriously, go to therapy

Mr. Edexy, in my next review towards you, I will tell you my opinion of your music that you made yesterday and next time 8)

EDIT: he also insulted me, why? I don't know, he's just a son of a bitch!

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

edexy responds:

Hey man, glad to see that I'm not alone here! It's very pathetic to this... person. To call a game dead that has just recently signed a contract with NCS, the largest label in EDM is at least stupid. And using this as a bias towards music, it's already a diagnosis lmao.

And yes, he insulted you for a reason, he's just weak and he needs to take out his worthlessness somewhere.

~{=Review=}~

God, I love the title of that music, this is the title of the most curious music I have ever seen in my life.

Let's see, let's stop joking, I love the composition you did to your music and it is a very well done and thought out loop, yes, the melody is relaxing and solid ~.~

The melody of your music really is like a freezer, I have listened to it twice and it gives me satisfaction; The truth is, a very good detail 8)

Really, these sounds are like a video game, I imagine it is some dungeon or a sky in an RPG or platformer e_e

Still, I loved your music and the melody gave me satisfaction, really, great detail and composition, great job! 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None.

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

None.

--Stars--
5/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
20/20 | A++

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

Hi everyone! I am Valentin Entertainment, this is my Newgrounds's account, and I'm a Geometry Dash's player :)

SSJ4-Valentin15 @StormsTheory15

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