StormsTheory15's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[stvr]

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Ewwwwwww...

I liked the transitions that your music, and the soundtrack that is composed, but what I don't like is that it is practically the same copy and paste and it doesn't do anything good, quite the opposite, I would recommend that it at least have more mixes and a soundtrack, and that you remove that same monotony that is already very overused, oh by the way...

Your music is not a loop at all :/

A loop should not have a drop ending, because it already becomes music than what you are thinking, a loop is more about having some soundtrack and/or rhythm that can fit with the beginning 8/

For the rest of the details that your music has, I want to tell you that part of it is good and part of it is (to be honest e_e) bad, but still, for the rest, you have to improve it! And there you will have more qualification from me

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

I really don't feel like summarizing, but you already have the details that I told you
1/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

Dug481 responds:

Yeah honestly this shouldn’t have been 3 mins

[Solid Start]

e_O
More or less, ~but there is a room of things to improve~

The piano could be better and not so "Ding", "Ding", and not make it so boring and fluid what piano is with the soundtrack :/

Also, their music is not Jazz at all, it's more like Synthwave or Drum N/& Bass, and the soundtrack is a little catchy, I recommend that you don't do it like that, and put more mixes on it, but not to make it so fluid and so empty @_@

For the rest, it needs to be improved and more mixes and soundtrack added!

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

Do better piano, more mixing, more soundtrack and not make it so sticky and fluid
3/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

[bye]

Your music is great! ^-^

The truth is, the sounds are interesting and somewhat ambient to be honest (although I don't like Hip Hop - Olskool music but that doesn't matter xD)

I don't see any problems with your music, it's all very well done, good job! But the only problem is that your music ended very quickly :l

Be careful, a good ending should have some kind of falling action before the cut, you have to remember that, but the sounds and the soundtrack are very well done and needs no changes, congratulations! :D

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None, it just improves the ending and that's it
4,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

[The Wanderer]

O.O
Your audio turned out quite nice, it was great! :D

But the only problem why I give 4 and a half stars is because the label that says "epic-drop" doesn't fit it well and on top of that your music is more Trance than Techno e_e

I would tell you to improve the parts of the drop, because an epic drop would have to be more intense and more about mixing and soundtrack, but be careful, it does not mean that you have to change the soundtrack (or something like that o_O) Just improve the parts of the drop, and just don't change anything else, but the soundtrack and the monotones it has were very beautiful :)

But still, I really appreciate your music, I only recommend improving the drop and that's it, otherwise, I see no problem. Congratulations! 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None, just improve the drop
4,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

AlastReYn responds:

Thank you for your assessment

[Mystery in the Garage]

Excelente tono y buenas mezclas (^-^)

Eso sí, te podría decir que hagas mezclas de sonidos y ritmos ya que tu audio en sí es un poquito aburrido (pero no tanto xd), ah por cierto, ¡no sabía que eres Hispano! o_O

Regresando a los sonidos, mejora un poco más los monótonos haciendo más mezclas de ello, y luego no hacerlo tan repetitivo >_>

Por lo demás, está muy bien, y de verdad, lo hiciste mucho mejor que la música anterior que le hice una reseña, ¡muy bien! 8)

~{=COSAS A/PARA MEJORAR=}~

Más mezclas de sonidos y ritmos, hacer mejor los monótonos y no hacerlo repetitivo y un poquito aburrido

-¡De nada! 8)
3,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

[Touhou - Bad Apple!!]

O.O
Really cool! Great, but...

Actually, your music, more than Heavy Metal, is more a mix of Electronic Rock, Electronic Pop and Techno genres (So ​​I recommend that you put your music on General Rock or Miscellaneous), and I would recommend that you capture a little more of the "Pop" (so to speak) that the original music has (but you do capture it like 60%, but that's fine ;P) Otherwise it's excellent, and you applied the original rhythm for the electric guitar, and really, it turned out fantastic! :D

Otherwise, it does not need any further improvement 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None, it's simply capturing a little more of the "Pop" that the original music has and that's it
4,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

Treviabot92-Virstein responds:

I'd personally more refer to it as a power metal cover if I could. Sadly, that (sub)genre isn't an option, so I instead use the heavy metal umbrella that it objectively belongs to.

The way I rendered the song was more meant to evoke nostalgia for an era of gaming not seen since the early 90s than it was to be a one-to-one recreation of how it appeared in various Touhou-related media. If I cover a song with the express purpose of making it as close to the original as possible, it's like it would be better if I hadn't covered it at all. At that point, there would be little merit in the piece for it to be called transformative use.

For you, I would recommend you give a listen to some power metal bands to see what exactly I'm trying to get at with my music. I doubt I'll ever hold a candle to the likes of Sabaton, DragonForce, Turisas, or Brothers of Metal, but hey, a guy can try. And I've definitely been trying for some fifteen-odd years, I'd like to think I've grown.

Thanks for the review!

[RobTop on the Dancefloor]

Robert Nicholas Christian Topala On E

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

[Lost At A Sleepover - Cover]

Relaxing and very good soundtrack (~.~),

Seriously, it turned out very cool and beautiful, it's like I was in a place of beautiful flowers, in a nice waterfall, beautiful! ^-^

Really, good job, but the only problem is that your music after passing minute 1:26 there is absolutely nothing, it is empty, I recommend that you look for an audio editor (or something) so that you cut your music to minute 1:26 exactly, and I recommend that you make your music a little more fluid (but not that much), Otherwise, I really appreciate it! And I also recommend that you put your music on Ambient

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

Simply trim your music to exactly 1:26 and make the audio a little smoother (but not that much)

-You're welcome! 8)
4,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15