StormsTheory15's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shatter]

For to be your first music it's not bad at all, but...

The truth is that I really appreciate your attempt, but I want to tell you that your music is not Dance, it is more like a fusion between Breakcore and Trance :P

Also, I want to tell you to make more soundtrack and more sounds of a higher quality, and put a little more BPM on it,

And for the rest, I really appreciate your attempt and you have a good soundtrack mix and it has a good potential to be your first music 8)

-You're welcome! ~(^-^)~
3,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

graveside responds:

Thanks! Yeah I’m not too familiar with genres, so I just put dance as a general one.

[Jungle Funkin']

Ehhhhhh...

The sounds are not very interesting, but they are more or less okay, I recommend:

№1- More rhythms and soundtrack with the piano

№2- Make it longer and more exciting the soundtrack with sounds

№3- Give it a better BPM @_@

For the rest, improve the piano a little more and it should be a little better :L
2/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

xanxoepico responds:

It is true that it's not very interesting, as I made it very quickly (in less than an hour lol) and could've done a lot better, however 2 of your recommendations do not apply fully to this specific song, because the collab asked for the songs to be at 185BPM, and only 32 bars, so it'd be going against it's rules to make it longer

[ROUTE 95]

~(^-^~) ~(^-^)~ (~^-^)~

I love your music very much, and it has very good rhythms and really, they are very wonderful and fun 8)

Still, I recommend you put a little more soundtrack and add a little more "Pop" (So to speak) in parts where there is no electric guitar

It is very beautiful, in some of it it has and they are very good and quite energetic, even so, it maintains excellent, very good Electric Guitar touches and that is what I liked most about your music ⁠\⁠(⁠^_^\) (/^_^)/

For the rest, I really appreciate it, but it will have to be improved a little in some parts

-You're welcome! :D
4,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

wwhhooami responds:

thank you for your feedback and kind words!

[Rose at Midnight (BLACK ROSE Ver.)]

~(^-^)~
Your music turned out great NemesisTheory :D

The sounds really remind me of Super Smash Bros. Brawl, and/or Dragon Ball Z,

It has a good tone in Rock with the fusion of Orchestra, but it is intense and very dramatic for an RPG game or for a fighting game O.O

Really, I was missing you NemesisTheory, you are one of my favorite artists and I love downloading your music and listening to them :')

I appreciate your return, your audio was very nice and impressive, I would like you to continue with the "Rose At" series

-You're welcome! 8)
5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

[{dj-N} Banga Torakku]

Is cute your audio Mr. dj-Nate *-*

But I recommend that you add more soundtrack, oh and by the way, your audio is more like Trance than House (*Cough* *Cough* For the section from minute 1:00 to 1:15/16 :P)

Returning to the sounds, I also recommend that you make much more Techno style rhythms, and that you put more effects that it has, since even so, it is a little (but not much) a copy and paste,

For the rest, your audio was very nice and I appreciate it in some things Mr. dj-Nate, I really like it 8)

-You're welcome! :D
3,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

[Waluigi’s Pinball Machine (ArczMusic Remix)]

Not bad at all...

The only problem is that the sounds are copy and paste, and by the way, your music is Techno rather than Dance (And on top of that, your music should be included in a Video Game), I recommend that you make more of a soundtrack,

And besides that, put a better BPM to your music with much more Dance elements, instead of a lot of Techno

After having listened to so much of the original music that comes from Mario Kart DS, you are missing some melodies that you should play :l

For the rest, it improves on the melodies that the original tone of Mario Kart DS has, which gives it much more soundtrack with the added rhythms, and uses more soundtrack tones and make the richer, more exciting sounds the original has, just a little more,

For the rest, you have to improve ~_______~
2,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

[Volcanic Eruption]

O.O
It's really great, but,

Your music uses a little bit of Trance and uses more 90% Drum/Dubstep, and another 10% Electro-House with Trance, it should be more of a miscellaneous music than Dance, while...

In the beginning part, improve it a little more, using more soundtrack and rhythms, and how much better is the soundtrack that it has in the drop part, and lengthen the ending a little more e_e

Still, I love the sounds that your music has, no more than I would like it to have more Dance, than a lot of Dubstep,

And be careful, I also like your music in some of the details it has, it's just that it has a lot of Drum/Dubstep with Electro-House and Trance

-You're welcome! ^-^
4/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

HardRoar responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

[16-bit is crazy 0_0]

>______<
Horrible and frightening!

Your music really is the worst 16-bit music I have ever heard in my life -_______-

I recommend that you capture much more of the "Pop" (so to speak), which has the 16-bit sound chips, and that they have the rhythms and soundtrack as if they were the ones that games like: Super Mario World, Mega Man X, Kirby Super Star, etc.

The soundtrack it has is very repetitive and a little annoying to my ears, I recommend that it not be a copy and paste, and give it a more exciting sound,

Oh and by the way, your music is not Techno, it's more like Trance or Drum N/& Bass, but not so much Techno, but otherwise you have to improve >:/

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

Lokory responds:

Ok, some things to clear up:
1. I just chose techne because there isn't an option for trap. Otherwise, yeah, I would have put it to dnb
2. As I said rn, I didn't try to make a perfect 16-bit song, I just used an instrument from there. Although making a 16-bit song would be cool :0
3. I for some reason always copy + paste my stuff and this is a problem I'm struggeling with. But I'm trying to not do that
4. I'm sorry man (┬﹏┬) I just wanted to make a trap song