StormsTheory15's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shined]

~{=Review=}~

Your music is super pleasant, the sounds it has are beautiful >v<

Let's see, the parts where they are repeated are great, a beautiful composition makes your music stand out, the sounds are the best I have heard 8)

Oh by the way, I'm going to correct you on the genre of your music, Law.

Your music is not Techno, it is more like Eurodance or Rave Trance, but Techno is not very good, I can only tell you to put it better in Dance, because as far as I know, The Eurodance or Rave Trance music category does not exist in these Grounds :(

I liked the sounds, I don't really see any problem or anything in the tone, it's just a great energy, but I can only tell you to become more and more informed when it comes to making music, what genre your specific music should be in, etc.

For the rest, I can even correct your spelling, but nothing more, but the things that your music has does not mean that I lower the stars of this review, I just want to tell you that your music is excellent and beautiful, congratulations! ~(^-^)~

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None.

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

Even though it has nothing to do with this review I'm doing, I can tell you that you should inform yourself in what genre your future music will fall into

--Stars--
5/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
20/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

LawrenceindaSky responds:

Thank you so much for the feedback! Although I messed with music editing for years, I only recently started producing tracks on rare occasion due to the struggle of creating original melodys off of chord progressions with no music theory. I still consider myself new so knowing Genre helps a ton!

[the_sound_of_us_demo.mp3]

~{=Review=}~

O.O
Very nice sound, really, music to my ears 8)

1. Very good electric guitar tone, congratulations!
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2. What an excellent composition of energy! :O
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3. Especially happy, and yes, it is
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Oh by the way, your music is not Heavy Metal, it is more Art Rock or Punk, but there are really no problems with the sounds and it is simply very well done and the energy gives it a positive touch

But the only problem that I almost gave your music five (5) stars is that I would like it to be longer, but don't change the sounds just keep extending it, Otherwise, your music is beautiful! ^.^

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None.

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

Make it longer

--Stars--
4,5/5 / 18,61/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

[A2]

~{=Review=}~

Okay, much better than your previous music ;)

Very good, the sounds and the composition have some horniness, but they hold it well.

Of course, your music compared to your previous music is not Dance, this is more Jungle or Ambient, really all the sounds do not need any change ;p

I really liked the sounds that are composed and the mixes themselves, but what I would like is for it to be longer, and oh by the way, A detail that will be very useful to you is that the next time you publish a short music (in this case twenty-nine (29) seconds) that is a loop, you have to send it to a ".wav" file because a ".mp3" sometimes does not detect loops, a ".wav" yes 8^)

Otherwise, your music doesn't need any changes to the composition, I just want to say that it would have been longer

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None.

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

Make your music longer, and by the way, for very short music (in this case twenty-nine (29) seconds) send it to the Audio Portal of these Grounds to ".wav"

--Stars--
4,5/5 / 18,71/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

ThisIsLoxum responds:

Yoooooo another one tysm again, I’ll try to make better songs and full ones

[A1]

~{=Review=}~

Pleasant sound and melody composed 8)

The thing I love most about every music artist is how they have made the sounds and how good they are. It's what I like the most, and to see the sounds I liked it and it has a good piano tone, really, pleasant!

Of course, your music is not Dance at all, it's more Breakbeat, I love the drop, but the beginning could be better by putting a little more volume, oh by the way, your music would have been longer :(

Of course, your music is not a loop and does not coordinate at all, so why did you put it in? o.O, well it can happen, right? xD

Returning to the sounds, otherwise I don't see any more, I just would like your music to be longer to be only thirty-five (35) seconds, otherwise, it's fine ^-^

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

At first put more volume

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

Make it longer, and by the way, if you are trying a loop you can say make some rhythm or composition that coordinates with the beginning :)

--Stars--
4/5 / 15,24/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

ThisIsLoxum responds:

Tysm for the reply, I didn’t try very hard on these songs but I guess they are good :)

[Theory of Skrillex]

~{=Reseña/"Review"=}~

O.o
¡¡¡Intensamente increíble!!! 8D

Me encantó las remezclas que hace la música "Skrillex GD Remix2" en algo distinto y eso me gustó junto a su extensión y de verdad que la composición ¡Está muy bien inspirada!

Tu música está más allá que ser Dubstep es más Hard Dubstep que el Dubstep ordinario y la extensión que le hiciste a tu música es lo que más me encantó de tu música, las partes repetidas me encantaron también para ser tu 1ra (primera) música Dubstep (aunque es Hard Dubstep o_O)

Ojalá, que tu música se pudiese usar para Geometry Dash, tu música ya me sirve para algo, me gustaría que hicieses una remezcla/"remix" en versión Dubstep de una música llamada "Elite Ferrex (Long Version)" de EliteFerrex, ¡por favor! >_<

Y por lo demás, me encantó tu música, realmente un gran trabajo, ¡felicidades! :D

~{=COSAS A/PARA MEJORAR=}~

Ninguno.

~{=IDEAS SUGERIDAS=}~

Ninguna.

--Estrellas--
5/5 / 20/20 y agregado a "Faves"

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

[Eclipse]

~{=Review=}~

O.O
@XwaynecoltX is right!

Still, I love the melody it has composed and repeated and everything, but your music is not Drum and Bass. It's more Jungle Techno,

I liked the sounds of your music and they are very pleasant and pretty to my ears, they are simple but hey, what can we do? o_O

What I would like more is for your music to have more variety of sound, and the composition is not completely changed, just a little, but don't exaggerate and also not be with the "bang", "bang" in almost all your music e.e

For the rest, I can only say that you make more variety and that's it and your sounds composed in your music are very nice, great! 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

More variety to your music and not have the same "bang", "bang" composed in all your music

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

None.

--Stars--
4/5 / 17,31/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

[The Elder's Fruity Tear]

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Excellent and relaxing,

The tones are very well done, very nice and relaxing in being an orchestra (even so, your music is not an orchestra, it is more easy-listening). The piano melody makes me give it more than three (3) stars.

But the only problem why I give it four (4) stars is that even though you made a very good piano rhythm, you could really make it softer and not completely fluid, Even so, apart from the piano, the composition is very good and relaxing, but it could have a little more variety and that's it (but don't go overboard)

Another thing is that your music is not a loop, a loop cannot have a fading action that makes your music end little by little and not completely coordinate with the end, I would tell you to do more composition and more rhythm and in the end blur it and make a little fall and that's it, otherwise it turned out well

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

More variety, make the piano smoother and not fluid

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

For your loop, I would tell you to do more composition, more rhythm and at the end do a fade and a little falling action and that's it

--Stars--
4/5 / 15,81/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

Tyhond responds:

Things to Improve (At the moment for me): Use a better Software xP

[Acción de la Sobrefuerza]

~{=Reseña/"Review"=}~

Muy buena música y temática que tiene compuestamente es sus variedad, y eso que tiene algo de emoción en tu música 8)

Realmente, tu música tiene mezcla de mayormente de "techno" con un poco de metal/rock, por mencionar que tu música tiene una composición, mezcla, banda sonora y ritmo son muy buena ambientación y muy interesante (aunque no son los sonidos más interesantes que he escuchado xd), aun así, a pesar de tener buenas mezclas, realmente podrías ponerle algo más de variedad y que no sea un poco vacío, aunque que dé algo de emoción, le podrías agregar más de eso e_e

Otro reparo que le doy a tu música es el final, yo diría que un buen final para tu música es que tenga algún tipo de acción de caída antes del corte, y en lo demás me encantó. Me gustaría que la melodía fuese un poco mejor y que no esté muy fluido con sus variedades y transiciones, por lo demás me agradó, ¡felicidades!

~{=COSAS A/PARA MEJORAR=}~

Que no quede muy fluido la melodía a sus variedades y transiciones, más variedad, más emoción y que no quede vacío

~{=IDEAS SUGERIDAS=}~

Cuando haces una música que no es un "loop", debe tener algún tipo de acción de caída antes de su corte

--Estrellas--
4/5 / 16,51/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

[PVZ Remake OST - Crazy Dave]

~{=Reseña/"Review"=}~

Excelentes mezclas y tonos compuestos de esa gran música de PvZ (Plantas Vs. Zombis), tiene muy excelente uso del "Techno" y "Melodic Trance", aunque, tu música tiene prácticamente la misma composición que la original >.<

Veamos, tu música tiene algunos problemas por eso le doy 4 estrellas a tu música, y es que a pesar de que tu música tiene algo de ritmo y composición versionada, realmente es escuchar la original prácticamente te diría que hagas tonos más originales, ah por cierto, si la música termina en el minuto 1:27, entonces tendrás que buscar un editor de audio (o algo así como e_e) para recortar tu música a esa duración que tiene,

Por lo demás me gustaría que le hicieras más mezclas y variedad a tu música para que tengas más posibilidades de que aumente ese "rating", ¡de nada! ;)

~{=COSAS A/PARA MEJORAR=}~

Más variedad, más composición y que no sea prácticamente lo mismo

~{=IDEAS SUGERIDAS=}~

La próxima vez que vayas a publicar una música donde una pequeña parte esté vacía y una gran parte tenga audio, busca un editor de audio o algo para recortar

--Estrellas--
4/5 / 15,03/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

CanineLotus responds:

Hola, gracias por tomarte el tiempo de escribir la reseña
quiero empezar con que la musica tiene ya un par de años pero aparte
Este proyecto de rehacer la banda sonora de PVZ Empezo por que cuando escuche la banda sonora original no tenia la mejor calidad, entonces queria simplemente mejorar la calidad recomponiendo la cancion original
despues eso muto a las mismas canciones con algunos cambios, en este caso como fue una de las primeras que hice no tiene practicamente ningun cambio
y sobre lo de la parte vacia, la proxima la voy a recortar
Gracias por la review!

[PopRocks]

~{=Review=}~

O.O
I love it and it has a good tone,

It has a very sound in being Drum N/& Bass but it is also mixed a little fluidly with its notes and that makes it a good positive point,

I really liked the sounds you made to your music, although they are not the best tones I have heard, but that's okay ;P

The only objection I have to your music is that it has a little more variety in its notes, since they are somewhat monotonous, but in part where they are repeated they are very well done and it needs more of that >.>

Also, I would like your music to be longer since it has good potential in sounds, but still, your music needs more variety, but don't change the sounds that your music already has, although, I liked the other parts of your music, good job! ;)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None, just more variety

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

Make it longer

--Stars--
4,5/5 / 19,03/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)