StormsTheory15's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[A3]

~{=Review=}~

Great job on the improvement!

Really, I do appreciate your music and in terms of composition, although your music is not Dance, it is more towards Dubstep, Drum N/& Bass or Miscellaneous music, and yes, I remember you 8)

The only thing I can tell you is that I would have given your music five (5) stars, If the speakers or pumps (I don't know how to call them :P) of the second 0:29/0:30 were not monotonous, altered and very dull to my ears, since they are a bit of an ear-breaker xD

Otherwise, it's a great job, although it is short, but appreciable!

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

What has already been mentioned.

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

None.

--Stars--
4,5
~~REAL SCORE~~
19,85/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

[Blue River (feat Aalasteir)]

~{=Review=}~

Excellent sound and composition, you did it well...

Let's see, for me it is not miscellaneous music that you put as a genre for your music, it seems to me like I don't know, like Jungle or New Wave, if you know, you can correct me 8)

Let's see, the sounds are well composed and their variety too, although this is not a loop, why did you put it in? o_O (*cough* *cough* whatever :P)

Returning to the sounds, the truth is that it doesn't need any changes and/or improvements, I just wish it were longer and that's it, I really appreciate it, Messrs. PA and Aalasteir, good job for your first collaboration between the two of you (2)! 8^)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None.

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

Make it longer

--Stars--
4,5/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
19,8/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

Aalasteir responds:

Thank you SSJ4-Valentin15, Yes, you are right. I'm not sure if it should be in the miscellaneous category; that was something I suggested. @PapoFuradoPA what do you think? It would make more sense to have labelled it as a song.

Thank you. Next time, hopefully, it will be a longer song.

[Ikaj [8-bit]]

~{=Reseña/"Review"=}~

A ver...
Tiene un excelente tono, como fanático de la música en 8-bit (y de verdad que es mi 2do (segundo) género de música favorito), te atrevo a decir que algunas notas no me satisfacieron del todo a mis oídos, sólo en algunas partes como el 0:53/0:54 hasta el 1:38/1:39, pero en partes no me convencieron como el 0:27/0:28 hasta el 0:50/0:51, de verdad, necesitan algo más de variedad en los sonidos, de hecho me recuerda un poco a "Pueblo Lavanda" de algunos juegos de Pokémon (no sé por qué xD).

Realmente, sí tiene potencial tu música y me gustó en algunas partes como 2:04/2:05 hasta el 2:31/2:32, pero gran partes de tu música, como que me gustaría más variedad y en especial energía. En partes, me gustaría verles como más alegres los tonos y la composición que le distes, pero que está algo monótono... Aunque está bien, sólo un poquito e.e

Por lo demás, me gustó tu música, especialmente por lo tan fanático que soy en temas de música en 8-bit (Chiptune), pero me gustaría más variedad y sobretodo en tener más esencia a los sonidos, ya que están muy desfigurados >.>, por lo demás, ¡tá' chido!

~{=COSAS A/PARA MEJORAR=}~

Más esencia, más variedad y energía

~{=IDEAS SUGERIDAS=}~

Si quieres puedes mejorar las partes que no me satisfacieron a mis oídos para que te des una idea, ¡pero eso ya es tu decisión!

--Estrellas--
3/5
~~PUNTUACIÓN REAL~~
15,07/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

[LIMBO!]

~{=Reseña/"Review"=}~

¡Muy bueno y relajante!

Realmente tiene un sólido sonido y ambientación que hace a tu música/pista un tono relajante y que la acompaña muy excelente con el piano ^.^ (por cierto, no escucho aveces música Jazz, no es porque no me guste, sino porque no me apetece demasiado; yo escucho música electrónica, pero eso no interesa ahora mismo xd)

Este sólido sonido hace que tu música sea relajante y tenga una buena composición, aunque no es la mejor composición que escuchado en mi vida, pero está bien 8)

Pero veamos, los sonidos y/o la composición te quedaron/quedó muy bien y eso te hizo que yo te diera una buena calificación de parte mía, sólo te quiero decir que tu música estuvo muy fluida y un poquito acelerado con los sonidos que hiciste a tu música, realmente me gustaría que fuese menos fluido y no tan acelerado, mas que sea más alegre e.e

Por lo demás, en la variedad de los sonidos después que escuché como tres (3) veces tu música, la verdad es que te quedó muy bien la variedad de tu música que has hecho, de verdad, ¡buen trabajo! ;)

~{=COSAS A/PARA MEJORAR=}~

Me gustaría que tu música no fuese muy fluida, ni tampoco que sea tan acelerada de lo que ya está y sólo quiero también que fuese más alegre, pero un poco

~{=IDEAS SUGERIDAS=}~

Ninguna.

--Estrellas--
4/5
~~PUNTUACIÓN REAL~~
16/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

itstdx responds:

muchísimas gracias por esta reseña tan bien pensada, tomaré tus puntos en consideración! :)

[Raving {W.I.P preview}]

~{=Review=}~

It's definitely good progress you've made and I appreciate it on my part,

It's what I like most about every music artist on this page or another and it's that they put energy into their things and I'll be able to have that one day ;)

Let's see, I don't see any problem with your music, I really love it. What's more, it seems more like "25/24 Seconds of Power", if it were a real loop I would like it even more.

Let's see, the sounds are really good, the composition does characterize the rest and the energy is very good.

I can't wait for the full version, please finish it! >_<

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

Please, finish your music

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

Maintain the energy you made with those 24/25 seconds of your music ;)

--Stars--
5/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
20/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

[Glass Soul OST // Soothing Glass]

~{=Review=}~

Interesting and relaxing tone,

Although I repeat it again (oh my God, the same mistake! O.o), your music is not a loop, but I'll let you pass that mistake. Let's see, good tone and I at least liked it, but I would like it to have a little more volume, because you can hardly hear anything xD, and let's see the Easy-Listening that is composed to your music, although it is repetitive, very repetitive. I really would like your music to have a little more variety and I'll give you a little more punctuation for this review from me (of course, I don't usually listen to Easy-Listening music, because it doesn't attract much attention, although it doesn't interest my tastes right now xD).

For the rest, more variety and that it had more volume and other things that your music has, I appreciate it, well done!

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

More variety and make your music louder

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

You already know about the "loop" thing you did in your music. I don't want to repeat it again

--Stars--
3/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
15,74/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

Tyhond responds:

I can hear perfectly fine? x3 It's quite loud for me.

Uhmm, it's not that deep xP I guess Variety would be nice but I like the way I make my music :> Of course the fact that there wasn't any mention of Chord or Melody means I pretty off to a nice track.

Thank you, even if it's a bit demotivating ;^;

[-586rick- fast trance]

~{=Review=}~

The sound is nice and it's a good point that I give it although...

I really want to tell you that your music is not Trance as I imagined from the title xD, but let's see your music is not what you say in the name of the track. It's more like Dance or Rave Techno, but Fast Trance is not.

Let's see, the sounds are good, I would like it to be more intense and more rhythmic, that is, more energy (so that you understand better >.<) and not be monotonous. For the rest, I liked some parts of the rhythm and composition when I listened to your track again, which I didn't decipher at first xD, but yes, it is somewhat monotonous,

Otherwise, I would like it to be more intense and with more energy and a little more variety in the sounds, but still, good job anyway! :)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

More variety, more energy, intensity and not being monotonous

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

Know the genre before naming your music

--Stars--
3,5/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
16,71/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

[bonus]

~{=Review=}~

Nice track and sound the loop has,

The loop matches the melodies very well (yes, I have already seen too much music from these lands/grounds where they capture it super badly xD)

It really makes it feel like a kind of jungle or something taken from Brazil or some African country, the style you did is very good, although "bonus" doesn't seem like the best name for your track to me, sincerely o_O

I don't see any problem with the sounds and variety, it was well done. Adding the soundtrack that is being mixed as you are listening to the track (yes, I literally listened to your loop like four or five times and the sounds still fascinate me :>)

For the rest, why I give it four stars and one medium is because I would like it to be longer and have some (but not as much) variety in the sounds, otherwise, excellent! 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

More variety

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

Make it longer

--Stars--
4,5/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
18,89/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

[-MetroMarket-]

~{=Review=}~

Very good music and the melodic sounds are very well done,

These were very well done, by the way, it is worth telling you that your music is not Jazz, it is more Classical, but I will let you pass that ;)

Let's see, the sounds are happy and they comment on the composition, the parts where the sound is lowered and then raised seem very good to me. In parts you did it well and it is something I like about every artist 8), Yes, Classical or Jazz music doesn't attract my attention as much, it's not that I don't like it, it's just that it doesn't satisfy, but I do listen to it sometimes, I love electronic music more e.e (although yes, it won't be to my liking right now, that doesn't matter xD)

For the rest, I liked your music in terms of composition; very creative and has a very good melody, congratulations! 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None.

~{=SUGGESTED IDEAS=}~

None.

--Stars--
5/5
~~REAL SCORE~~
20/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)

Creeperforce24 responds:

I actually thought you sent a comment to the collab and not my song lol 😂
Also I put it as jazz due the oboe you hear, and it sounds more authentic! Glad you like it!
Also if you like electro, you might like some of my other stuff.

[⅁ᴀʀᴅᴅɪᴇ - 𝐹i𝓃 𝒟𝑒𝓁 𝒥𝓊𝑒𝑔𝑜]

~{=Reseña/"Review"=}~

Excelente los tonos y las mezclas son relajantes, su energía influye y mezcla en un ambiente, tu música sí tiene un tono de Ambient/Jungle.

Lo único que no me gustó de tu música es que comience muy lento y muy discordial con el principio y a eso le pasa con el final, que se va muy lento, le quedaría mejor que termine directamente. Ahora veamos los sonidos:

1. Agradable tono pero podría haber más mezcla ambiental:

Te diría que hagas más mezclas y que tengan un tono más agradable y que influya al Ambient o Jungle.

2. La melodía va muy fluida y adelantada:

Te recomendaría que la melodía no esté acompasa de lo que ya está, simplemente no hacerlo muy fluido y un poco adelantada.

3. Los sonidos del principio parecen de un ventilador o de una secadora de pelo:

Simplemente debería ser un poco mejor.

Por lo demás, te quedaron muy bien los sonidos, pero deberían ser mejor y no estar aburrido, además de mantener una buena esencia y ahí te daré una mejor puntuación de parte mía 8)

~{=COSAS A/PARA MEJORAR=}~

Lo que ya te comenté, porque ahora mismo me da pereza escribir todo esto aquí

~{=IDEAS SUGERIDAS=}~

Para el final y el principio que comience directamente y no de manera lenta y repetida

--Estrellas--
3/5
~~PUNTUACIÓN REAL~~
13,84/20

//~SSJ4-Valentin15 (Valentin Entertainment)